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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 16, 2009 20:55:36 GMT -5
(this thread will be updated every time a new LV is achieved)
Tsunami Punch A single punch that feels the same as being hit my an adult Ram. The attack is made by using Aqua Soul to cover his hands in water that is spinning from front to back over the knuckles and under the palm.
10-Hit Takeout after reaching the 3rd lv of Aqua Soul Keon will search for two hot spots in the arms and legs as well as one in the neck and chest. After locating these Keon will dash at his opponent with blinding speeds locking all the set points and leaving his opponent in a stunned in the same position they were attacked in for 2 to 3 minutes and can be reduced to one minute by people with enormous amounts of body control.
This ability cannot be used currently for it is still under revision as is the kenkki genkai it stems from.
Lung Lock After reaching the 3rd lv of Aqua soul Keon will locate five hot spots in the chest surrounding the Lungs as well as the left, right, or both lungs. After locating the spots Keon will then preform traps to evade attacks then once he is close lock all or most of the hot spots in the chest of his opponent. if done correctly the user will suffocate until the hot spots are unlocked.
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 16, 2009 21:33:48 GMT -5
Include the draw backs of these abilities and they shall be accepted.
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 17, 2009 19:53:27 GMT -5
The first two jutsu are accepted. Lung lock shall have to be re-submitted once the bloodtrait has been edited properly.
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 21, 2009 8:08:08 GMT -5
Haseo-Sensei may I change the last one into a upgrade for one I already posses, please?
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 21, 2009 15:39:11 GMT -5
Sure, just be sure to include the vitals such as weaknesses and how long it lasts every time its performed and how many times it can be used and the amount of time it takes to recharge. Upgrade or not thats a powerful ability and should require a period of rest before it can be used again.
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 24, 2009 9:45:19 GMT -5
I will just give him another Gate he has the First Three already Opening, Rest, and Life gates
Shoumon (Wound Gate)
Further increases speed and power, usage will begin to tear the body's muscles. This gate is located along the spine.
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 24, 2009 16:03:23 GMT -5
Works for me. Have fun with it and don't kill yourself lol.
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 24, 2009 16:39:29 GMT -5
dnt worry i wont but i will get Wounded
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 24, 2009 16:44:26 GMT -5
Like Lee...just be careful not to destroy your muscles beyond all repair either...[evil lol]
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 24, 2009 22:34:43 GMT -5
How many posts should i be able to do with each gate? Heres what i think Opening 100 (No real drawback) Rest 50 (No real drawback) Life 20 ( puts strain on muscles) Wound 10–15 (Begins to tear muscles)
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 24, 2009 22:53:16 GMT -5
Humans once again cannot tolerate that much stress on the body. I know lee was not at the same power ranking as Keon [lee was genin and keon is kage] so keon should be able to handle it for a little while longer than lee could.
I think the first gate should be more like 30 posts since strain can really cause a muscle to tire out pretty quickly.
And the 3rd gate I think would be more reasonible around 15 posts, half that of the second gate.
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 24, 2009 22:57:59 GMT -5
So its should look more like Opening 30 Rest 15 Life 8 Wound 4
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 24, 2009 23:40:20 GMT -5
That would be if Keon was a lower rank. As a kage he should be able to keep it up longer than that.
50 30 20 15
that seems reasonible enough to me. as he continues to train and earns the other gates the number of times he can use the beginning gates will gradually increase. sound alright?
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 25, 2009 1:24:17 GMT -5
Cool thanks. I thought u meant the gate of opening was 30 but this seems much better.
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 25, 2009 1:49:25 GMT -5
no. sorry, didn't mean to confuse you
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 25, 2009 12:55:33 GMT -5
Is cool. no harm done ^^
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Post by Haseo Epitaph on Dec 25, 2009 20:05:29 GMT -5
alright so its decided again. we'll continue once he gains more gates^^
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Post by Black Dragon on Dec 25, 2009 21:29:56 GMT -5
Ok
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